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Wednesday, January 01, 2020

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wish you a happy and fabulous new year.

-The organisation's benefits were greater this year than the previous year.
than =as compared to/in comparision with/as opposed to /against.

Corporation gains were more in current year as compared to previous year .

Happy New Year! Wishing you all the best in life

The company made more profits as compared to last year.

The company made more revenues than the previous year.

The bottom line of this financial year of the company has posted tremendous financial growth, compare to last financial year.

Hello Mr. Simon, wishing you all the best in the coming year. Its my first time to post here,

The company earned more money this year as opposed to the previous one.

This years Income of the cooperation was escalated comparing to the previous year

Happy New year Simon.

I want to thank you for teaching IELTS in such a wonderful manner.
I have finally achieved my dream score in IELTS

L 8.5
R 9.0
W 7.0
S 7.0

in last attempt I scored 6.5 in writing, and I was disappointed and felt that I would never achieve 7.0 in this module. but you helped a lot and I followed your advice and explained ideas in 3-4 sentences.
I also focused on giving a range of grammatical structures
i used
although ________ yet
while _________ but
unless
as
because of
could
would
might
can
continuous passive voice
compound sentences ( and, but)
with
after
prefixes
past indefinite tense (negative)
sentence beginning with a gerund

this really helped a lot :)

thank you once again

The organization made more profit as compared to previous year.

FROM SIMON:

Congratulations Jaismeen. I'm happy that my lessons helped you to get that band 7 in writing!

This year saw a noticeable increase in company's earnings compared to last year.

The firm made higher profits this year that the previous one

Thank you Simon :)

the company made more profitable year than previous year.

FROM SIMON:

Although I do read the comments here on the blog, I’m afraid I don’t have time to check people’s answers. If you really want to speak to me, I’m replying to comments on my member site.

The benefits of the corporation this year were more enormous compared to last year.

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