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Believe to why

Adults'

Exercise not plural

Hours by spending on television

1. There are many reasons (to prove) why this is detrimental.
2.They have an impact on young adults' health.
3.The number of people doing physical exercise is falling.
4. By spending hours in front of television we lead a sedentary lifestyle.

1. to believe that
2. adults'
3. exercise
4. with

1. There are many reasons why I believe that this is detrimental.
2. They have an impact on young adults' health.
3. The number of people doing physical exercise is falling
4. By spending hours watching TV, we lead a sedentary life.

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1. There are many reasons to believe that why this is detrimental.
2. They have an impact on young adults' health.
3. The number of people who are doing physical exercise is falling
4. By spending hours watching TV, we lead a sedentary life.

1. there are many reasons to believe that why this is detrimental.
2. they have an impact on young adults' health
3. the number of people who are doing physical exercise is falling
4. by spending hours on watching tv, we lead a sedentary life.

1. There are many reasons why this is detrimental.
2. They have an impact on young adults' health.
3. The number of people doing physical exercise is falling.
4. By spending hours for television, we lead a sedentary lifestyle.

1.There are many reasons why this is detrimental.
2. They have an impact on young adults' health.
3.The number of people doing physical exercise is falling.
4.By spending hours in front of a TV , we lead a sedentary lifestyle


By spending hours in front of screens,
we lead a sedentary lifestyle.

1.There are many reasons why this is detrimental.( repetition)
2.They have an impact on young adults' health.(plural)
3.The number of people doing physical exercise is falling.(singular)
3.By spending hours watching television, we lead a sedentary lifestyle

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