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Six bust stops are replaced by one bus station, public car park and staff car park are separated, two roundabouts are made

Sorry it should be written in past

Facilities:
1. The original shared car park was made into a staff only car park.
2. A new car park was built to the east of the hospital for exclusive use for the public.
3. 6 bus stops on both sides of Hospital Road were demolished, and a bus station was constructed to the west of the road.

Road developments:
1. The two intersections on Hospital Road, with Ring Road and with City Road, were replaced by two roundabouts.
2. Two side roads were laid to connect the newly established bus station with the roundabouts.

1 - The two intersections , to the north and south, of hospital road were replaced with roundabouts.

2 - The 6 bus stops where removed in favor of a newly constructed bus station, which is connected to both roundabouts by a short road.

3- The old parking space was made into a staff-only parking and a larger parking area to the east of Ring road had been laid.

.Majority of the changes were found around the hospital road.
. Hospital road was connected between roundabouts.
.Bus stops on the both sides of Hospital road were removed.Now, on its left side , bus station which is directly connected roundabouts.Area of the bus stations was increased.
. On right side of Hospital road , bus stop plus car park (staff/public) were together in one place. After that, car park was split in two regions.Staff car park was adjacent to Hospital road while public park was proximate or close to City Hospital to its right side.size of public car park was made bigger than that of staff car park.

1. two new roundabouts
2. bus stops removed
3. bus station added
4. car park divided in two: public and staff car park

here is my sample answer:
The following pictures give illustration about the changes of a road which lead to an urban hospital after 3 years from 2007.
Generally, many facilities such as the car park experienced modifications while the others tended to disappear due to some replacements.
A closer look at the maps reveals that until 2010, two ranges of bus stops located on both sides of the Hospital road were grouped into one bus station in the South-West area of the hospital. One more noticeable feature was the appearance of the new car park used for public to the East of the hospital while the previous one belonged to just staff only.
Furthermore, we can also realize the existence of two roundabouts in the second map. One located in the intersection of two roads whereas the other was in front of the city hospital and both of them lead to the bus station. After all, the Ring road which encompassed the hospital still remained during the 3-year period.

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sorry i realize some words are wrong: lead->led
( past simple:)

1. The public car park was built in the east city hospital.
2. The intersections in the north and south the hospital road were replaced by roundabouts.
3. The 6 bus stops were removed to built a bus station in the west hospital road. Two side oads were also constructed to connect the bus station with the north and south roundabouts.

sorry I make a little change to complete the detail.

1. The public car park was built in the east city hospital so the old car park was for staff only.
2. The intersections in the north and south the hospital road were replaced by roundabouts.
3. The 6 bus stops were removed to built a bus station in the west hospital road. Two side oads were also constructed to connect the bus station with the north and south roundabouts

1.Sixth bus stops have merged into a bus station on the side of west.
2.The public and staff car park have been separated.
3.The staff car park is on the East of Hospital Road and the public car park is one the East of City Road.
4.The Ring Road and City Road each road has increased a roundabout which connect to Hospital Road and a but station.

Here is my sample essay:
These two maps illustrate the changes in accessing the city hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Overall, during this period, it is clear that the infrastructure of the city significantly developed, especially in intersection upgrades, the new layout of bus facilities, and parking spaces.

From 2007 to 2010, the most striking change was the appearance of the two new roundabouts in Hospital Road. The first roundabout was located at the three-way junction of Hospital Road and the Ring Road surrounding City Hospital, while the other was situated at the four-way intersection of Hospital Road and City Road.

Looking at the other features, the six bus stops along Hospital Road were removed to make way for the new bus station on the Western side of this road. In terms of parking spaces, the public and staff car park were separated; the staff parking space was still in the original area, whereas a new public car park was constructed on the East side of City Hospital. The entrances of both car parks were put on Ring Road and linked by a bend in the South East of this road.

hlo sir
can u please tell me
which sentence is correct?
there is row of tress on both sides of the road
or
there are row of tress on both sides of the road

Two graphs illustrate the change in a road, which connects to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Generally, the constructions were modified significantly, especially in the bus facility, the parking system and the road development. First of all, the originally shared park was only handled staff’s cars in 2010. In addition, the public car had a new parking on the East of the hospital and had the entrance on the Ring road, the same as the old staff car park. One more noticeable feature was the appearance of two roundabouts. The first one was located on the three-way junction of Ring road and Hospital Rd. The other was situated on the intersection between Hospital Rd and City road. Two range of bus stop beside Hospital Rd were eliminated and the bus station was built to substitute for them. The bus infrastructure was opposite the staff car park and had two roads accessed directly to each roundabout.

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