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1. liberal values

2. accessible to / increasingly accessible to

3. students

1. liberal values/ more liberal values

1.more liberal values
2.increasingly accessible to
3.university's students

Dear Simon,
Here are my answer:
1. Liberal values
2. Increasingly accessible to
3. Students

Tks.

1. liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

1. more liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

Thanks!

1. around the world
2. increasingly accessible to
3. university

1.liberal values
2.increasingly accessible to
3.students

1.around the world
2.Increasingly accessible to
3.students

1. liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3.students

1. More liberal values 2. Increasingly accessible to. 3. Students attending university

1/ science
2/ increasingly accessible to
3/students

1. Liberal Values
2. Increasingly accessible to
3. Students

Done in 3 mins - 15 sec!

around the world
increasingly accessible
students attending

liberal values
increasingly accessible to
students

1.liberal values. 2.increasingly accessible to 3. University students

1. More liberal values
Popular = spread around the world
The 19th century =end of 1800 s
Promoted =based on

2. Increasingly accessible
Over last 200 years =in 19th and 20th centuries
General public = the masses

3. Students

1.Science
2. Accessible to
3.Students.

liberal values
increasingly accessible
students

1.liberal values
2.accessible to
3.students

1-liberal values
2-ncreasingly accessible
3-students attending

1 liberal values
2 increasingly accessible to
3 students

liberal values
accessible to
students

1. religion
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

1- more liberal values
2- accessibility
3- students

Dear, Mr Simon

My answer is:
1, Liberal values
2, Increasingly accessible
3, Student attending

1. more liberal value
2. increasingly accessible
3. students

Libral values .1
Increasingly accessible to .2
Students .3

1-more liberal values
2-increasingly accessible
3-students

1. More liberal values
2. Increasingly accessible
3. Students

1-Liberal values
2-Increasingly accessible to
3-students

1-Liberal values
2-increasingly accessible to
3-students

Ta

1- liberal values
2-increasingly accessible to
3-students

1, liberal values
2, increasingly accessible to
3, students

1. liberal values
2.increasingly accessible to
3.students

1 more liberal values
2 increasingly accessible to
3 students attending

1-Science
2-Increasingly accessible
3-Students

hi fellows.i m planing to appear in ielts exam at the end of july and my aim is target band 7 in each and over all 7.5,looking for serious study partner from pakistan

1. liberal values
2. increasingly accessible
3. students

Key words:
1. more liberal values.
Words in synonym: spread around the world = became famous
2. increasingly accessible.
Words in synonym: In the 19th and 20th centuries = Over the last 200 years
the general public = the masses
3. students
Words in synonym: fee-paying = from fees ... must pay.

1.Worldwide
2.accesssible to
3.students

Inspired by sir Simon..My latest attempt..

Some people think that the teenager's years are the happiest of our lives while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that older age brings lot of joy in everyone's life and is the happiest moment. Personally I believe younger age is more pleasurable than older age in anyone's life.

Those people who think adulthood brings lot of happiness in someone's life might argue that adult people are the most experienced ones and usually learn the harsh reality of life. Due to constant upheavals in their lives they are forced to extricate the formula for happiness. A part of this, most of them have already acquired essential components for external happiness such as money, luxurious car, and extravagant mansion. While some of them tend to learn meditation techniques for internal purification of mind, body and soul which brings total rejoice in their lives. It is also believed that happiness is gained through social status and professional achievement. For example the position they hold or skill they learn from their workplace. Due to this reason they might feel more dignified and self-esteemed.

In my opinion, Freedom it the most important factor for happiness. And youngsters are the most fortunate ones to get total freedom. They don't hold any responsibility towards family. For example they don’t need to work to raise money for fulfilling fundamental needs such as food, housing. They are totally backed up by their parents so they find themselves in the comfort zone. As a result they don’t need to fight and struggle with cruelty of life. A part of this, teenagers are more involved in recreational activities such as sport, music, dance and visit with friends, which influence them positively towards happiness.

In conclusion............

1. more liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

Thanks

1. liberal values
2. accessible to
3. university

1.liberal values
2.increasingly accessible to
3.students

1. Liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. Students

1. liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

1) liberal values
2) increasingly accessible
3) students

1- more liberal values

2- increasingly accessible

3- students attending

CORRECT ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

1. (more) liberal values
2. (increasingly) accessible to
3. students

My answer is

1. liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

More liberal values
Increasingly accessible to
Students attending university

1. Liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

more liberal values
increasingly accessible to
students

Explain :
1.
Popular = spread around the world
The 19th century =end of 1800 s
Promoted =based on
2.
Over last 200 years =in 19th and 20th centuries
General public = the masses

santosy,
trying to identify and correct the mistakes of grammatical error thinking about it logically here are some of the mistakes:
countable nouns: lots of joy /a lot of happiness (? ) happy adjective
-pier, -past feeling, showing, or expressing joy; pleased collection: joyful life, time / happy life comma: for example, they
Article: the cruelty cause and effect: overuse due to
X= causes a Y= effect (e.g....., so; consequently (adverb),... lead to / result from (phrasal verb)
Be concise

1. liberal values
2. increasingly accessible to
3. students

Liberal values
increasingly accessible to
students

1 Liberal Values
2. Easily Accessible to
3. Student

1. liberal values
2. accessible
3. students attending university

Liberal value...
increasingly accessible....
Attending students...

1. liberal values
2. accessible to
3. Students

1 liberal values
2 increasingly
3 students

My answer is:

more liberal values
increasingly accessible to
students

more liberal values
increasingly accessible to
students

Good evening simon sir im new here can you please kindly tell me why u wrote (more)and (increasingly)in answer1 and2 While in the 3rd blank u write only (students) please explain

my answers for first point is liberal values
and for second one is increasingly accessible
the last point is by students attending

thank you
simon

liberal values
increasingly accessible
students altering

liberal values
accessible to
students

Dear simon i always have doubt in my mind writing answer for example if i write this paragraph answer ACCESSIBLE TO

liberal values
accessible to
students

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