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1. The pie chart compares New Zealand and the UK in term of household expenditure from 1980 to 2008.

2. The table compares five different countries in term of the money they spend on tourist activity over a two year period.

1. The charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of the household spending patterns in each country between 1980 and 2008.

2.The table compares five countries in terms of the amounts of money spent by tourists over a period of two years

Hi

1- the pie charts compare UK and New Zealand homes in terms of their spending patterns from 1980 to 2008.

2- the table compares five countries in terms of their tourists spending over a period of two years.

My Answers below:
1. The pie charts compare the UK & New Zealand in terms of the amount of money spent by different families in a decade.

2. The table compares different nations in terms of amount spent on tourism in two years time.

1.The pie charts show spending patterns between 1980 and 2008 in the UK and New Zealand in terms of household.
2.The table shows the amounts of money spent in five different countries over a period of two years in terms of tourists .

The pie chart compares the uk and newzeland in terms of house holding spending pattern for two decade..

The table compares five countries in terms of money spent by tourists for two years..

1.The pie charts compare spending patterns between 1980 and 2008 in the UK and New Zealand in terms of household.
2.The table compares the amounts of money spent in five different countries over a period of two years in terms of tourists .

Hi All,

The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in term of household appliance between 1980 and 2008.

The table compares five different nations in term of expense the tourist paid over a period of two years

hello everyone.

The pie charts compare UK and New Zealand in terms of household expenditure between 1980 and 2008.

The table shows five different countries in terms of amounts of money expenditure of them over a period of two years

sorry i did mistake in 2nd introduction.

The table shows five different countries in terms of The amount of money spent by tourist over period of two years

1. The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of their household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008.

2. The table compares five different countries in terms of the amounts of money spent by their tourists over a period of two years.

Do you think the above answers are genuine, Simon?

Thank you so much!

The pie chart compares New Zealand and the UK in term of household expenditure people spent on from 1980 to 2008.

The table compares five different countries in term of the money tourists spent over a two-year period.

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1.The pie charts compare Korea, Sweden and UK in terms of their waste disposal procedure.

2. The pie charts compare Korea, Sweden and UK in terms of the percentage rate of various types of disposal methods.

1
The pie charts show household spending patterns in the UK and New Zealand between 1980 and 2008.
=> "The charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of spending items from 1980 to 2008.
2 . The table shows the amounts of money spent by tourists in five different countries over a period of two years.
=> the table compares between five countries in terms of tourists spending their money over the period of two years.

1.The pie chart compares the UK and New Zealand in erms of spending items from 1989 to2008
2.The table compare between five countries in terms of tourists spending their money over the period of two years

Hi Simon,

I'd like to express my gratitude to you!! Got my results last Friday and today (I took 2consecutive tests in two diffirent cities here in Australia). And I got both 7.5 in writing (although I think I did much better in the second one) and 8 overall. That's all thanks to your kindness and generosity, I've learnt everything in IELTS writing from you and no other sources (I did search for others but only trusted yours!). Please accept my deepest gratitude for that Simon, I wish you long-life health and happiness!!!

Ha xx

PS: I highly recommend everyone to purchase Simon's ebook. It's truly amazing and helpful!

1. The chars compare between the UK and New Zealand in terms of expenditure for household from 1980 to 2008

2. The chart compares five countries in terms of money spent by tourists over two dacades

1. The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008.
2. The chart compares five different countries in terms of the amount of money spent by tourists over a period of two years

1/ The charts compare the United Kingdom and New Zealand in terms of house spending patterns during the period from 1980 to 2008.
2/ The chart compares various countries in terms of expenditure spent by tourists during two-selected years.

1. The charts compare British and New Zealand in term of purchasing for household catalogue between 1980 and 2008.
2.The diagram compares five various nations in term of expenditure for travelling in a period of two years

1.The pie charts compare UK and New Zealand in terms of the household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008.
The table compares five different countries in terms of the amounts of money spent by tourists over a period of two years.

The charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household expenditure from 1980 to 2008.

The chart compares five countries in terms of tourist spending over a two-year period.

It's my answer
1.The pie charts show household spending patterns in the UK and New Zealand between 1980 and 2008.
-> The charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household expenditure in each country from 1980 to 2008.
2. The table shows the amounts of money spent by tourists in five different countries over a period of two years.
-> The table compares five different countries in terms of tourists expenditure in each country over the period of two years.

The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of ways of household spending.

The table shows five different countries in terms of capital spent by tourists over the course of 2 years

The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household expenditure pattern over a period of 10 years.
The table compares the five different countries in terms of money spent by tourists over a period of two years.

1. The pie charts compare two different countries, namely New Zealand and the UK, in terms of household spending pattern over a twenty-eight-year period, from 1980 to 2008.

2. The table compares five different countries in terms of the proportion of money spent by tourists in each country over a two-year period.

Hi Simon,
The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in term of the family's needs to household over a twenty-eight-year period between 1980 and 2008.

The table compares five different countries in terms of money spent by tourists over a two-year period.

ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

I've tried to rewrite the sentences in the easiest way possible. Remember that the aim was to use "in terms of", not to make other changes.

1. The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008.

2. The table compares five different countries in terms of the amounts of money spent by tourists over a period of two years.

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Congratulations Ha!
I'm glad my lessons helped you to pass.

Dear Simon,

I have two questions, the First one is with regards to writing 1, in all of your video lessons you pointed out that we should not include a conclusion paragraph , although in the last paragraph of most of the model answers in IELTS Cambridge the examiner added an overall paragraph, I found that confusing? so shall we or shall we noT write a conclusion in writing part 1?

The second question is for the fill in the gaps questions in reading ,.I was practicing these type of questions in particular when we are given a list of words to choose from , the words in list are not the same as in the text and sometimes they do not follow the order in the text, so how can we approach these types of questions .

many thanks


1. The pie charts show household spending patterns in the UK and New Zealand between 1980 and 2008.
=> The pie charts compare NZ and the UK home in terms of their spending items from 1980 and 2008.
2. The table shows the amounts of money spent by tourists in five different countries over a period of two years.
=> The table compares five countries in terms of tourists spending their money during two years.

1. The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of their household spending patterns from 1098 and 2008
2. The table compares five countries in terms of the amounts of money the tourist spent in two years.

1.The pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns.

2.The table compares five countries in terms of the amount of spending of tourist over a period of two years.

The pie charts compare the Uk and New Zealand in term of spending in two country on household patterns
The table compare tourists in five difference countries over period of two years in terms of amount of money spent

The table compare five countries in terms of the tourist spent their mony over period of two years

The pie charts compares the UK and New Zealand from 1980 to 2008 in terms of household expenditure.

The table compares the five different countries in terms of amount spend by foreigners for two years period.

Is it right to put foreigners instead of tourist i am getting confused. Please suggest me.

The chart(s) compare(s) + countries + in terms of + finish the sentence"

The pie charts show household spending patterns in the UK and New Zealand between 1980 and 2008.
_> The charts provided illustrate the UK and New Zealand in terms of household expenditures over a period of 38 years
The table shows the amounts of money spent by tourists in five different countries over a period of two years.
The table chart given illustrates five nations in terms of the amounts of money spent by visitors in a duration of 2 years


Hi Simon and everyone
this is my first time here so I hope that Simon or anyone could correct my sentences.
The charts compare UK and NEW ZEALAND in terms of families expenditure across 28 years.
The table compares five different countries in terms of the amount of money spent by tourists over the period of two years.

1. The two pie charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns with 28 years period between 1980 and 2008.

2. The table compares five different countries in terms of the amount of money spent by tourist over a period of two years.

The pie chart compares the UK and New Zealand in terms of domestic expenditure between 1980 and 2008.

The table compares each countries in terms of the expenditure for traveling over two-year decade.

1: The pie charts compares the UK and New Zealand in terms of consumption pattern for families between 1980 and 2008.

2: The table compares five different countries in terms of total tourism revenue over the course of two years.

Hi Simon,

Question: can this formula "The chart(s) compare(s) + countries + in terms of + finish the sentence" be applied to all types of charts/graphs when we are paraphrasing the introduction?

Thank you! :)

1.) The chart compares the UK and New Zealand in terms of changes in domestic expenses from 1980 to 2008.
2.) The table compares visitors in five countries in terms of total cash spent by them across two years.

The pie charts compared the UK and New Zealand in terms of house hold expenditure over a ten year period.

The table compared five difference countries in terms of the amount of money that tourists spent over a two year period.

The Pie chart compare UK and New Zealand in terms of spending houselhold patterns from 1980 to 2008


The charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008.

The table compares five countries in terms of money spent by tourists over a period of two years.

Nice practice.

The pie chart compares the UK and New Zealand in terms of family spending from 1980 to 2008.
The tables compare the five different countries in terms of income from tourists over a period of two years.

"The chart(s) compare(s) + countries + in terms of + finish the sentence"

The pie charts compares the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008.
The table compares five different countries in terms of the amounts of money spent by tourists in over a period of two years.

"The chart(s) compare(s) + countries + in terms of + finish the sentence"

The pie charts show household spending patterns in the UK and New Zealand between 1980 and 2008.
=> The charts compare the UK and New Zealand in terms of household spending patterns between 1980 and 2008
The table shows the amounts of money spent by tourists in five different countries over a period of two years.
=>The table compares five different countries in terms of traveling expenditure by tourist over a 2-year period

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