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May 05, 2011

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It is very useful.
Thank you, Simon.

Thank you so much, Simon.

Can we use "at" in the middle of the sentence?
e.g.Unemployment reached at its highest level at 10% in 2008.

This is really helpful to all beginners in writing their essay works.

Thanks, Simon.

Hi,

This is a very informative piece. I guess this is one of the major mistakes committed by IELTS examinees since there is a similarity of its use. But then they have to be reminded that to, by, with, and at should be used properly.

Thank you.

Simon,
Day by day, I feel that you are a great teacher. You know what the candidates need. Thanks.

Thanks for all your positive feedback. I'm glad you found this lesson useful.

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Hi Alice,

Just delete the "at" after "reached". The rest of the sentence is fine.

useful lesson!!!

Hi Simon
Could you please give us a model answer for this question?
I realy confused how to start the main paragraphs…
Thanks


RANG OFACTIVITY A B C
FEMALE MEMBERS 35% 35% 30%
MALE MEMBERS 55% 40% 5%
CLUB FACILITIES
FEMALE MEMBERS 64% 22% 14%
MALE MEMBERS 63% 27% 10%
OPENING HOURS
FEMALE MEMBERS 72% 25% 3%
MALE MEMBERS 44% 19% 37%

A = VERY SATISFIED
B = SATISFIED
C = NOT SATISFIED

sorry, it was a table but it didn't appear as it was.
thanks

Hi Mohd,

You just need to compare the percentages. For example:

The table shows that 35% of women were very satisfied with the range of activities, whereas 55% of men were very satisfied. On the other hand, 30% of females were not happy with the range of activities, but the figure for unhappy males was much lower, at only 5%.

I'm afraid I can't write the whole essay at the moment, but maybe I'll use it in a future lesson.

thank you very much Simon
this is too enough for me to complete the rest of the essay. I was confused how to start the main paragraph. thanks a lot.

No problem Mohd.

Hi Simon
I wonder if there is any difference between `fell by 2%ˊ, `fell by 2 percentage pointsˊand `fell by 2 per centˊ

thanks

Hi Mavis,

There's no difference. You can use either, but I tend to use the first one for speed.

Hi Simon,

I want to express my great thanks to you. I am very grateful that you help us in this way. Following your lessons help me so much that you can not imagine. Again I want to express my gratitude to you. My exam will be in September, and I think your site will helb me so.

Hi Simon,
I confuse with these words all the time. This lesson is very heplful. Thank u so much.

Dear Simon,
I have been following you for a long period. I really appreciate for all your help to the students. Although I still haven't reached my targeted ielts score, I have learnt a lot from your website. You are a great teacher. Thank you.

Hi Simon,
I am still confused with the preporsition "at" and "with". According to your essay, "at" is used to add the number on the end of a sentence. However, I saw a sentence from an IELTS model answer to task 1 writing:

"However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, WITH 21% and 19% respectively."

As you can see, it uses "with" on the end of the sentence. Why? Can I change it into "at" in this sentence?

Dear Simon, can you reply to the question of joshua above? I have the same question.
Thank you

Ducchu206,

Have a look at this lesson and the other lessons linked within it:

http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2015/07/ielts-writing-task-1-with-and-at.html

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