Here's the first half of my report about the chart in last week's lesson. I'll finish paragraphs 3 and 4 next Thursday.
The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.
It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.
Can you see the paraphrasing that I used in the introduction, and the main points that I chose for the overview? Did I use any good words or phrases?