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Simon

Your writing style invariably developed in a manner that you follow in task 2 writing.

When this will be my habbit, I'm not sure.

keep going and going
evolved as
gradually refined
step-by-step progression
lack of structure
own unique order
engaging and creative

Dear Simon´╝î
I want to ask you a question,"Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed as they are used as money-making attractions, while others think it is the only way to save them. Discuss both views and give your opinion". This question have given us clear point, but I don't know how to organize the paragraph. It is too hard for me tp understand the fact that cultural traditions will be destroyed as they are used as money-making attractions.

@SU YIN

Try reading the following for ideas:

https://abritandasoutherner.com/barcelona-mass-tourism-destroying-local-culture/

https://greenglobaltravel.com/how-mass-tourism-is-destroying-destinations/

https://www.worldcrunch.com/food-travel/how-mass-tourism-is-destroying-bali-and-its-culture

https://dxschool.org/ielts-writing-task-2-people-think-cultural-traditions-may-destroyed/

https://writefix.com/?page_id=2722/about-this-forum/does-cultural-traditions-use-as-touist-attraction-will-be-destroyed-or-saved-by-tourists

https://essayforum.com/writing/ielts-cultural-traditions-destroyed-developing-51427/

@SU YIN

https://abritandasoutherner.com/barcelona-mass-tourism-destroying-local-culture/

https://greenglobaltravel.com/how-mass-tourism-is-destroying-destinations/

@SU YIN

https://www.worldcrunch.com/food-travel/how-mass-tourism-is-destroying-bali-and-its-culture

https://dxschool.org/ielts-writing-task-2-people-think-cultural-traditions-may-destroyed/

https://writefix.com/?page_id=2722/about-this-forum/does-cultural-traditions-use-as-touist-attraction-will-be-destroyed-or-saved-by-tourists

https://essayforum.com/writing/ielts-cultural-traditions-destroyed-developing-51427/

@SU YIN

https://writefix.com/?page_id=2722/about-this-forum/does-cultural-traditions-use-as-touist-attraction-will-be-destroyed-or-saved-by-tourists

@su YIN

https://essayforum.com/writing/ielts-cultural-traditions-destroyed-developing-51427/

I'm really agree with your viewpoint of not everyone must follow a fixed process to study english. Using the small patches of time to learn something new during everyday is the best way for me.

@Sheryl

Something new for today: "I'm really agree with your viewpoint...." is just not a phrase people use, and the grammar is wrong anyway. It should be "I entirely agree", or "I absolutely agree that ..."

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=agree+with+you%2Cagree+that%2Cagree+with+*%2C*_ADV+agree%2C+absolutely+agree&year_start=1800&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Cagree%20with%20you%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cagree%20that%3B%2Cc0%3B.t2%3B%2Cagree%20with%20%2A%3B%2Cc0%3B%2Cs0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20the%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20you%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20me%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20him%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20those%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20them%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20this%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20his%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20Mr.%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bagree%20with%20that%3B%2Cc0%3B.t2%3B%2C%2A_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%2Cs0%3B%3Bnot_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bquite_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bentirely_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bnever_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Balso_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bperfectly_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bfully_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Balways_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bgenerally_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Breadily_ADV%20agree%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cabsolutely%20agree%3B%2Cc0

Hi Simon,

I am totally agree with what you have mentioned in this post. I enjoy searching for the suitable articles to match with my progress in preparing the Ielts. Thanks for your effort :)

Christine

good work

Thank you so much.

Are we allowed to touch the bottom lines on the IELTS Writing Answer Sheet while writing the essays using a pen or a pencil?

Hi ! I want to ask you about the ielts writing task 2. (Academic)

There are questions like

-Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Do you think this is a positive development or negative development?

Is it okay if I write in one view like, only about advantages or positive aspects, or only about disadvantages or negative aspects?
Or is it a risky thing to write like that?

Suemin yoo

https://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2011/09/ielts-writing-task-2-do-the-advantages-outweigh.html

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