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Dear sir,
I want to know that, if i get 30 numbers in listening out of 40.Then, how many band will i get?

@jk

https://www.ielts.org/ielts-for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail

Google "IELTS Band Score Calculator"

Dear Mr Simon

Thank you so much :=))

How to get band 9 for Task Achievement in Task 1 ?

"fully satisfies all the requirements of the task" (band 9)
versus
"covers the requirements of the task" (band 7)

Erika

The difference between a 7 and 8 is sometimes seen in the 'amount' of information. An 8 level Task Achievement might include more comparisons, for example, or might be able to show a greater interpretation of the data. A 7 would probably state more numbers directly (eg: 73) whereas an 8 would be more descriptive (eg: almost three quarters). The difference between an 8 and 9 is usually more language based - a 9 has no vocabulary or grammar errors, so they are able to be more precise with the data because they have a stronger ability with vocabulary. (eg: the figure rose more modestly).

From an examiner's point of view, you only award a 9 for TA to people whose vocabulary and grammatical accuracy is in the 8 to 9 range. This is because people at the 6 or 7 level are making errors in these areas and that makes their description of the data less clear.

So my answer to your question is to improve your vocabulary and grammar scores to the 8/9 level first.

@Kati
Thankyou for kind info.

@sjm

Thank you kind Sir

The bar graph illustrates the proportions of European waste as to how it is disposed of.

It is clear that about half the EU countries dump most of their garbage in landfills. Also, all EU members employ the three most widely used methods of treating waste, except Greece and Ireland.

Landfill- managed waste accounts for more than half the total amount of waste from other means with Greece having the largest percentage (90%). In contrast, while Denmark has relatively the smallest figure for landfill use, most of its waste is incinerated which makes up just over 40%, the highest among EU countries.

Managing waste through recycling or composting is also a common practice in Europe. Austria recycles most of its rubbish (around 60%) while Greece's waste is recycle the least at only 10%. Other methods of managing waste are not comparatively common.


Would appreciate to hear some feedback. It's good to learn from each other. Thanks.

@Timothy

"employ all three most widely used methods":
"all" is clearer.

Previous comments:

" Issues with Task 1, especially a) focusing too much on small details b) missing a key feature, such as not mentioning a category" (sjm)

http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2016/10/ielts-writing-task-1-did-you-notice-the-80.html

"...never describe each category (column or row) separately. The examiner wants to see comparisons."

http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2011/10/ielts-writing-task-1-tables.html

"Make sure that you write something about each country. Select the most relevant point for each country, and don't forget to mention some figures."

http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2011/07/ielts-writing-task-1-selecting-details.html

So maybe:

"...while Denmark and the Netherlands have relatively the smallest figures for landfill use."

"Austria and Belgium recycle most of ...and 50% respectively"

"Other methods played a small role in Spain and Germany (at about 8% and 12% in that order)."

@Timothy

OR Other methods were relatively uncommon, playing a minor role in Spain and ... " etc

@Timothy

To mention and categorize ALL countries:

3 countries landfill >80%-90% (the vast majority of waste)
4 countries landfill around 60-75% (the major portion)
2 countries incineration > 50%
2 countries recycling > 50%
2 countries (France and Germany) "using variety of methods" (and give detail)

Thanks guys for the feedback.

I doubt whether each country should be mentioned, even at least once, since there are too many.

@ Timothy
Your submission was only 142 words in total.

Below is the detail section only mentioning all countries @109 words:

Landfill accounts for the vast majority of waste (around 80-90%) in three countries: Greece, Ireland, and UK. Landfill also predominates in a further four countries, namely Italy, Portugal, Spain and Finland, at approximately 60-75%; while playing a much smaller role in most of the remaining countries.

Incineration is the main method in Denmark and Luxembourg, and significant in another four countries.

Recycling is used in all countries, predominant in Austria (~60%), and very significant (over 37%) in Belgium, Netherlands, Germany, and Sweden.

Disposal mechanisms are more evenly spread in France; and other methods played a small role in Spain and Germany (at about 8% and 12% in that order).

@Timothy

Maybe you are right: it is easy to fall into the trap of "mechanically recounting detail" (band 5).

There is a real-life summary of waste management in the EU covering 32 countries here:

https://www.eea.europa.eu/themes/waste/municipal-waste/municipal-waste-management-across-european-countries

Some quotes (which point up key features):

"The data suggest large differences in performance among countries."

"Germany, Austria, Belgium, Switzerland, the Netherlands and Sweden recycled at least half of their municipal waste in 2014."

"The highest increase in recycling rates between 2004 and 2014 was reported in Lithuania, Poland, Italy, the United Kingdom and the Czech Republic (increase of 20–29 percentage points)."

"Overall, in 15 out of 32 countries, the increase in recycling rates was at least 10 percentage points over this period."

"However, in seven countries, the proportion of recycled municipal waste barely changed and in two countries it even decreased slightly."

@ Hue

Yeah I found out I made a short-of-words response just after I posted my answer.

Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it.

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