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Dear Simon,

I have followed your blog for a couple months, and it is really useful and help me a lot.

However, recently I met a question, and I am really struggle with it. I have no idea how to build this type of question in you four paragraph strategy.

could you please give me some hint?

Here is the question:
Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

@ Wang

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=advantages+than+disadvantages+*&year_start=1960&year_end=2008&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t2%3B%2Cadvantages%20than%20disadvantages%20%2A%3B%2Cc0%3B%2Cs0%3B%3Badvantages%20than%20disadvantages%20in%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Badvantages%20than%20disadvantages%20to%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Badvantages%20than%20disadvantages%20for%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Badvantages%20than%20disadvantages%20arise%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Badvantages%20than%20disadvantages%20from%3B%2Cc0

Thus: "... more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house compared to living in an apartment."

I wonder whether this is a real IELTS question, or culled from some dreadful guide.

There really is some excellent advice on how to formulate your answers on this site. All you have to do is click on "IELTS Writing Task 2" in the left sidebar.

In British English, "flat" is often used as a noun to mean "apartment" - which often suggests something more upmarket.

http://etymonline.com/index.php?term=flat&allowed_in_frame=0

http://etymonline.com/index.php?term=flat&allowed_in_frame=0

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=apartment%3Aeng_us_2012%2Capartment%3Aeng_gb_2012%2Cflat_NOUN%3Aeng_gb_2012%2Cflat_NOUN%3Aeng_us_2012&year_start=1960&year_end=2008&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Capartment%3Aeng_us_2012%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Capartment%3Aeng_gb_2012%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cflat_NOUN%3Aeng_gb_2012%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cflat_NOUN%3Aeng_us_2012%3B%2Cc0

@Oleg70

hi I know this website is useful.I learn everything about IELTS form this blog, but i have no idea why you post those graph website

about your question yes this is a real question from CAMBRIDGE 7 GENERAL TRAINING A

hoping someone can give me some advice

Wang

See comment by Milad (and examiner) here:

http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2014/08/ielts-writing-task-2-can-you-see-the-problem.html

@ Oleg70

WOW!!! thank you for you help, I finally can make sure whether i should mention my own opinion or not. There are so many sample of the essay topic on other websites, and some with writer's opinion, some without. however they all claim their essay have band 8~8.5, which was the reason why i am so confused.

best of luck with you

all the best

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