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Good day Simon,

Please tell me if my sentence and paragraph construction is correct. I just want to know if I am doing the right thing. I made an introduction and an overview. Thank you.

The line graph compares the percentage of British homes with one car, two cars, three or more cars and those without cars over a period of 36 years from 1971 to 2007.

It is clear that the proportion of families in the U.K with two cars increased significantly over the period shown, while families without cars decreased considerably between 1971 and 2007. Furthermore, the trend were inversely proportional.

Maybe you all never heard Taobao. It is not a good idea to sell lessons in China, you will earn nothing.

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=decreased+by+the+same+amount%2Cby+roughly+the+same+amount%2Cat+roughly+the+same+rate%2Ctrends+were+inversely+proportional&year_start=1800&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Cdecreased%20by%20the%20same%20amount%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cby%20roughly%20the%20same%20amount%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cat%20roughly%20the%20same%20rate%3B%2Cc0

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=in+the+opposite+direction%2Cover+the+same+period%2Cover+the+period+under+*%2Cover+the+period+shown%2C+over+the+period+in+question&year_start=1800&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Cin%20the%20opposite%20direction%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cover%20the%20same%20period%3B%2Cc0%3B.t2%3B%2Cover%20the%20period%20under%20%2A%3B%2Cc0%3B%2Cs0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20consideration%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20review%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20study%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20discussion%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20examination%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20investigation%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20observation%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20analysis%3B%2Cc0%3B%3Bover%20the%20period%20under%20reference%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cover%20the%20period%20shown%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cover%20the%20period%20in%20question%3B%2Cc0

simon, you are a nice guy, but above the guy saying is considerable ( nearly 98%) , please think about you business reputations in the website . if the partner is James Z the one ,who are only (maybe :50% ) you can trust in China .
sorry Dear James Z to mentioned you name here

FROM SIMON:

Thanks guys, I know about the problems with copying in China. I do trust the partner mentioned above, and they are working on ways to give students the kind of service that they can't find if they get a copied version.

That's so great!!!

Thank you again, Simon, for providing us so many helpful trainings.

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