Here are my corrections for the sentences that I showed you last week.
1) Sentence containing mistakes
In 2005, School A faced major problem in Following Instructions about 42%.
In 2005, 42% of children in school A had difficulty following instructions.
2) Sentence containing mistakes
In comparison to 2005, spelling and following instructions have doubled over 10 years.
In school B, the proportion of pupils who struggled with spelling and following instructions doubled over the 10-year period.
3) Sentence containing mistakes
For example, 6% students having troubles in spelling in 2005.
For example, 6% of students in school B had trouble with spelling in 2005.
4) Sentence containing mistakes
Handwriting accounted level off with 28% in two years, yet it was the most percentage of the problem in 2015.
Handwriting became school A’s most significant problem in 2015, although the percentage of children experiencing handwriting difficulties at that school was the same in both years.
5) Sentence containing mistakes
Followed by the same number 35% of students in listening skills and verbal expression of ideas.
In 2005, 35% of students in school A were struggling with listening skills and verbal expression of ideas.