Last week I suggested that you plan some ideas for the question below.
Some people prefer renting than buying a home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting your home?
Here's a 13-sentence essay plan using the ideas that people shared:
1. Introduce the topic (e.g. It is true that many people rent...)
2. State that there are benefits and drawbacks
3. Topic sentence (e.g. There are several advantages...)
4. Firstly: easy, flexible and fast
5. Example: students and workers who move to new cities
6. Secondly: no maintenance costs
7. Finally: cheaper, no mortgage deposit
8. Topic sentence (e.g. On the other hand, there are also...)
9. Main drawback: not a long term investment
10. Another drawback: landlord sets rules
11. Example: not allowed to renovate or redecorate
12. Furthermore: prices can suddenly go up
13. Repeat / summarise