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In my opinion, I guess we can make approximate number for those.
For example, One car~ 55%,Two car ~ 25 %, No car ~ 15 %, and other ~ 5%.

I think we can still answer the question
by comparing the proportions of the pie chart.

More than half of car owners in Canada have one car, while a very small number of car owners have more than two cars. The figure for canadians owing two cars is second highest, which is slightly higher than for canadians owing no car.

ANYONE PLEASE FIND OUT MISTAKES AND TELL HOW IS IT.
DEAR SIMON,

The pie chart below depicts percentage of Canadian mature person who possess one or more than one four-wheelers or also those who does not have their own car.

Overall,more than half of grown person has their own automobiles,from all most containes one car.

It is clear that,adults like to have atleast one car,over 50% of the Canadian mature people. While, roughly fourth quarter of adults living in Canada likely to have more than one cars. 15% of the Canadian teenagers do not like to have any motor car. Moreover, roughly 5% of adults love to spend more money on motor vehicles, by buying 2 or plus automobiles.

From chart, most of adults in Canada prefer to have single car, followed by two car owners whose percentage are quite similar to people owning no four wheeler. There are very few people having 2 cars or more.

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It is clear that more than half adults in Canada own one car, at about 55% of those. The figures for Canadian adults having two cars and no car are lower, while the percentages of those who have more than two cars is by far the lowest in 4 items.

Dear Simon,
In some tasks, I don't have any idea of paraphrasing the topic such as "sport centers","mobile phone" and "festival". I have to inevitablely repeat the topic over and over again.
Using "it" or "them" are a bit confused.
Do you have suggestions for this situation?
thanks.

obviously it cannot compare, contrast, without the number. every task 1 need the figures, percentage, so don't do it that will be waste your time

I still can describe it by using these words like: more than a half, just under a half, this was less than that, and the least...
CAN YOU HELP ME?
There are 3 pie charts, 3 years, and 5 items, what should I do? How to organise its body?
Thank you for your time.

The pie graph gives the information about the ownership of cars in Canada.

It is clear that vast majority of Canadian people owns at least one car. It is also noticeable that considerable proportion of people in Canada has no private vehicle.

The pie graph shows that as many as 60% of Canadian has only one car for their personal use, while the figure for those who do not own any car is significantly less (just 20%).

In terms of ownership of two or more cars, around one-fourth people can afford to have two cars in Canada. By contrast, the Canadians owning more than two cars accounted for just 5%.

(please correct my mistake)

Hmmm...Wow! this is just so surreal. I hope it will not be presented in the real exam. Anyway, if it will be brought out in the future writing test 1, I think I will certainly do the following strategies. First, I will plan for this part and utilize all the basics and components of a pie chart which I learned. For instance, pie chart can only have a total rating of 100 %. In this way, I can estimate or you can estimate, with the use of some simple imagination and addition; the different proportions of adults in Canada who own one car, two cars, more than two cars, or who do not own a car. Second, we can use approximation to estimate the number of percentage of each car category with the help of colors presented in the chart. Therefore, we can now estimate the percentage in each proportion of the pie chart and when you add it all up, you must have a total of 100 % in the pie chart.

Hi Simon 😊

Is it possible to use the word 'account for' but not directly followed by number? For example, the UK accounts for the most significant rise from 2% to almost 75%.

Thanks

The pie chart gives information about car ownership among Canadian adults as who have one car, two cars, more than two cars or who do not have a car.

It is clear that vast majority of Canadian adults are motor car owners and they may have one, two or more cars.However, a noticeable amount of them have only one car according to the given pie chart.

Among around 85% of car owners in Canada, about 55% of them have only one car while, almost 25% and 5% adults have two cars and more than two cars respectively. Feather more, the least percentage among Canadian adults have more than two cars is almost 5%. However, approximately 15% of them is a considerable percentage that who are not owner for at least one car in Canada.

In conclusion, while enormous population has at least one car, significant number has on ownership for a car in Canada.

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