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1.Finally,development in economy might help a nation to tackle the problems such as currency fluctuation,natural damage,terrorist attacks etc.

2.Finally,a sustainable economy help the government prepare for the natural disaster as well as the battle against inflation.

3. Finally,strong economy provides a better life style for its inhabitants.

4.Finally,in broader aspect, progress in economy enable government to gain power in political arena that helps the future progression of a country.

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1.Finally,economic development might help a nation tackle such problems as currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attack.
2. Finally, a sustainable economy also helps its government prepare well for natural disasters as well as battles against inflation.
3. Finally, a strong economy could lead its inhabitants to a better life.
4. Finally, from broader perspective, progress in economic development enables a government to have more authority in political arena, thereby provides a more promising future to a country

4. the country instead of a country

Finally, the economic development might help a nation tackle with such problems as currency fluctuation, natural disasters, terrorist attacks.
Finally, the strong economy also helps the government well-prepared for natural disasters as well as the battle against inflation.
Finally, the strong economy leads towards a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.
Finally, from the broader aspect, progress in economy enable the government to gain authority in the political arena, thereby helps to future progression of a country.

1. Finally, development of an economy might help a nation tackle with problems such as currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attacks,and the like.

2. Finally, a sustainable economy helps the government prepare for natural disasters as well as the battle against inflation.

3. Finally, a strong economy leads to a better lifestyle for inhabitants by the state providing the art of technology???

4. Finally, from a broader aspect, progress in economy enables the government to gain authority in political arena,thereby helps the future progression of a country.

Finally, the economic development might help a nation tackle with problems such as currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attacks and the like.
Finally, the sustainable economy also helps the government well-prepared for natural disasters as well as the battle against inflation.
Finally, strong economy leads towards a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.
Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enables government to gain authority in political arena, thereby helps to future progression of a country.

Finally, development of an economy might help a nation tackle with such problems such as currency fluctuations, natural damages, and terrorist attacks...etc.

Finally, a sustainable economy also helps the government to be well-prepared for the natural disaster as well as the battle against inflation.

Finally, strong economy leads towards a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing a state of the technology.

Finally, from a broader perspective, progress in economy enable a government to gain authority in a political area, thereby helps to future progression of a country.

Finally, the development of economy might help a nation tackle with issues such as currency fluctuations, natural disasters and terrorist attacks.

Finally, a sustainable economy also help the government well prepare for natural disasters as well as the battle against inflation.

Finally, a strong economy could help inhabitants enjoy a better life.

Finally, from a broader perspective a thriving economy enables a government to gain more influence in political arena and thereby contribute to a more promising future of the country.

1-Finally,economic development might help any nation tackle many problems such as currency fluctuations,natural disasters,terrorist attacks and the like.
2-Finally,a sustainable economy also helps the government to be well-prepared for natural disasters as well as for controlling inflation.
3-Finally,a strong economy may lead to an affluent lifestyle trend among inhabitants, as they will be able to employ state-of-the-arts technologies.
4-Finally,from a broader perspective,economic progress may enable the government to control the political arena ,thereby achieving long-term stability in its country.

Finally, development of an economy might help a nation tackle with such problems as currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attacks and even more.
Finally, a sustainable economy also helps the government well-prepared for natural disaster as well as the battle against inflation.
Finally, strong economy create new lifestyles which are more modern and fashionable.
Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enable government to gain authority in political arena, thereby supporting long-term progression of a country.

1) Finally, development of an economy might help a nation tackle with such problems as currency fluctuations, natural disasters, terror attacks and so on.
2) Finally, a sustainable economy also help the government prepare well for natural disasters as well as the struggle with high inflation.
3) Finally, strong economy leads to a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.
4) Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enables government to empower authority in political arena, thereby helps further progression of a country.

1- Finally,economic development of a country helps in tackling the problems like currency fluctuation,natural disaster and terrorism etc.
2–finally, a sustainable economy also helps the government to prepare well against natural disaster and inflation.
3–Finally, strong economy leads towards a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing resources to innovate in state of the art technology.
4–Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enables the government to gain authority in political arena as well.

1/Finally, economic development helps a nation to tackle with problems such as currency fluctuations, natural damages and terrorist attacks.
2/Finally, a sustainable economy also helps the government well-prepare for natural disaster as well as the battle against inflation.
3/Finally, strong economy leads to a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.
4/Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enable government to gain authority in political arena, thereby helps for future progression of a country.

1. such as
2.to be well-prepare
3."leads to" not leads towards,state-of-the-art
4.enables

1. Finally, [THE] development of an economy might help a nation tackle with problems [SUCH AS] currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attacks and the like.

2. Finally, a sustainable economy help[S] the government [TO] well-prepare for natural disaster as well as the battle against inflation.

3. Finally, [A] strong economy leads towards a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.

4. Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enable government to gain authority in political arena, thereby helps to future progression of a country.


1. “Such as” means as “for example” and I don’t understand what does “the like” mean? so I rewrite this sentence bellow:
Finally, economic development might help a nation tackle with problems such as currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attacks.
2. Add “s” to help and after “as well as” we don’t use a clause.
Finally, a sustainable economy also helps the government well-prepare for natural disaster as well as againsting inflation.
3. I think we can use can, could, might for talking something maybe happen, so add can before lead is better and I don’t understand the meaning of “the art technology”
Finally, strong economy can lead towards a better lifestyle for inhabitants.
4. Add s to authority because authorities of one country government. After thereby should use V ing:
Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enables government to gain authorities in political arena, thereby helping to future progression of a country.

ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

First here are the problems:

1) Write "the development". We don't say "tackle with" in English, just "tackle". It should be "natural disasters" not "damage". Also, I wouldn't write "and the like" in an IELTS essay. "such problems as" is fine, but most people are more familiar with the phrase "problems such as".

2) We need to write "helps" and "to be well-prepared" or "to prepare". I would prefer "reduce inflation" instead of "the battle against inflation".

3) Don't forget the article in "a strong economy". Also, we say "leads to" instead of "leads towards".

4) The phrase "from broader aspect" doesn't exist in English. Remember articles: "the / an economy", "the political arena", "the future progression". Use the "ing" form after "thereby": "thereby helping..."

FROM SIMON (continued):

Here are my correct versions:

1) Finally, THE development of an economy might help a nation TO tackle problems such as currency fluctuations, natural DISASTERS AND terrorist attacks.

2) Finally, a sustainable economy also helpS the government TO PREPARE for natural disasterS AND TO REDUCE inflation.

3) Finally, A strong economy leads TO a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.

(NOTE: I'm not sure how the economy "provides" technology - this seems a bit strange to me. However, the sentence is now grammatically correct)

4) Finally, IN A BROADER SENSE, progress in THE economy enableS THE government to gain authority in THE political arena, thereby helpING THE future progression of a country.

Thanks for such constructive feedback on my sentence

Finally, development of an economy might help a nation tackle with problems such as currency fluctuations, natural damages, terrorist attacks and the like.
Finally, a sustainable economy also help the government well-prepared for natural disaster and the battle against inflation.
Finally, strong economy leads to a better lifestyle for inhabitants by providing state of the art technology.
Finally, from broader aspect, progress in economy enables the government to gain authority in political arena, thereby helping to future progression of a country.

thank you Simon!

very helpful thanks master

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