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It is common to hear that some people are increasingly being in hope of the current century and consider it as an opportunity for good changes to the globe.In my opinion, some changes could bring better results for the world but I would like to see it in the next century.

Hi Simon! I am waiting your essay...

it is true that some people have an increasing hope regarding the current century. they are looking for revolution and achievement that will change the face of the globe. in my opinion, such changes are unlikely to take place in the following decades.

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Nowadays it is ever more common to hear about that some people have expectation regarding the current century and review it as a chance to bring about good changes to the globe. From my point of view, some changes could have better consequences for the World, and I would like to witness a few ideas in the following century.

Sincerely.

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Speaking part 2. Talk about a program or an app on your phone you like using".
I hope this help someone. Good luck everyone

Congratulations flor.
I am found this blog is very effective as a beginner and i understand i need lots of practice to overcome my current position. However, i try to correct the introduction below:

It is commonly heard that some people are in hope of the current century and look forward to see good changes in the globe. In my view, some changes can be better for the world, there are few ideas that I would love to see in the next century.

It is commonly heard that some people are in hope of the current century and there are good changes to the globe. In my view, some changes today can be better for the world, but I would love to see them in the next century.

It is increasingly considered by some that changes are likely to occur globally within the current century. In my opinion, while many changes are not always desirable, I believe that spontaneous ones will be beneficial to our society as a whole throughout the following century.

FROM SIMON:

First, let's look at the grammar problems.

It is commonly increasing to hear about that
Should be:
It is increasingly common to hear that

people are in hope of the current century
Should be:
people are optimistic about the current century

and look it as an check out to make good changes to the globe
Should be:
and see it as a chance to make positive changes around the world

From my view some changes can be better for the world
Should be:
In my view, several changes can be made to make the world a better place

there are few ideas that I would love to see in the nextby century
Should be:
there are various developments that I would like to see over the next century

Instead of making these grammar changes, it might be better to rewrite the whole introduction. I've written a simplified (and correct) version here:

http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2016/06/ielts-grammar-simplify.html

It is increasingly common to hear that some people around the globe consider current century as a turning point to make changes. From my point of view, some changes can be good to the world. There are a few ideas that I would love to see in the next century.

Congratulations flor!

People's positivity towards having an even better world throughout the century grows significantly.Perhaps, mainly because of the huge improvements that are highly evident these days and I strongly agree that this could be really happening .I even look forward to this world having more amazing innovation plans in the next century. :)

There is an increasing concern of many people across the world about ideas can change the world. In my opinion, changes can bring positive effects on the world and I am looking forward to seeing some ideas turn into practice in the next centuries

Ielts answer 25 june 2016 listening
1. Fowler
2.
3.waiter
4.streets
5.Health services
6.police
7.parks
8.schools

31.egg
32.energy
33.antifreeze
34.moderate
35.north america
36.6months
37.trees
38rivers
39.sun
40. Tourists

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