In last week's lesson I asked whether you could see the problem with an essay outline. The problem was the use of "many people" in paragraph 2.
If the question asks whether YOU agree or disagree, don't write a paragraph about what other people think. The whole essay should be about YOUR views.
Click here to see how I wrote a 'balanced opinion' essay. Notice that the opinions expressed are all my own; I don't mention what other people think.