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Hi Simon.This is sheshi from Hyderabad India.hope ur in ol.i have my exam on jan 12th.practicing to the core to get 7 band to apply for masters in canada.read ur previous sessions of almost from past 1 year.tel me the things which i have to do in these last 10 days .expecting a positive reply.

Hello Simon
I wish you could write an essay about the role of politicians and scientist in the society. I think it is not an easy essay especially under exam conditions.
Regards.

Hello Simon

thank you very much for your valuable lessons
I thought the exam would be harder. i did not expect such a good results:

writing: 8
speaking:9
listening:9
Reading:8.5

Thank you very much

Carolina

carolinaoscar@yahoo.com

Congratulation carolina . Wish you all the best in your life.pls could you tell me how many times have you done the exam?

Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


There are various ways to punish criminals all around the world in order to reduce criminality and provide security to civilians. I accept that sometimes capital punishment is necessary. However, I believe that death sentences are not fruitful in decreasing crime, violence and other offenses
In one hand, supports say that capital punishment deters crime effectively as people have fear of the death penalty which stops them from committing offences. Moreover, capital punishment defines seriousness of offence so before committing such offence person will think twice. Also, Death sentence is a form of revenge which gives a feeling of peace for victim. Otherwise many times a victim converted into offender in order to take revenge and punish accuse by own. Additionally, capital punishment is a way to avoid imprisonment cost which can otherwise be used by government in development.
On other hand, I think that capital punishment is not a good way as Innocent people could be wrongly convicted and executed. There is no evidence about the reduction of crime rates due to the way of death penalty. Many criminals do not think they will be caught therefore they do not have fear of this kind of punishment. Also, Capital punishment is not a good deterrent. Rehabilitation and education is good way in order to prevent or minimise offensive acts. Executing prisoners creates a violent culture and encourages revenge which can increase crime.
In conclusion, I think that we have no rights to take another human life so lifelong imprisonment until death can be a better way to punish criminals.

Congratulations Carolina!

Your results are extraordinary!
Are you a native speaker or such a good English user, giving more hope to non-native people struggling to achieve similar results?

Wow, great scores Carolina. Well done!

1)I started teaching english
2)I start to tech english.

which is correct

Hi Friends,

Can someone please provide your feedback on the below passage. Do I covered the entire question and organised nicely for band 7:

Task 2:
Nowadays, people can work and study at home through the internet. However, the effects of long-distance programs can never be as good as fact to face programs. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Answer:
People have different views about working and studying, while there are some advantages of being working at home and studying at home. However, I personally believe that personal interactions are usually more productive.

On the one hand, I agree that there are greater opportunities of being working and studying at home thought internet. Many people have a tendency to earn money out of their free time by staying back at home. Internet has brought a rich variety of opportunities to get connect with any organisation across globe. On top of these, internet also facilitates to expand their knowledge and gain greater qualification that opens the door to better job opportunities. There are huge ranges of eLearning, eCertifications and variety of study materials for regular academic course are also availed in Internet, which simplifies the student life to enhance the knowledge.

However, I believe that group work and group study are more beneficial. Working at workplace opens the door for creativity and expands the knowledge of organisation traits. It is clearly visible that a majority of successful people in life are profoundly preferred working in a team. Moreover, combined studies and teacher interaction courses are also useful. Combined studies smoothens the lives of student for better understanding of the subjects , to easily clear-off the doubts and to provoke thoughts, eventually help to secure higher grades.

To conclude, for the aforementioned reasons, I personally believe that group activities are more beneficial than automated computer learning to lead successfully their job or studies.

Hi Simon,

If the question ask to 'discuss both views and give your opinion', then can I write my conclusion like below:

To conclude, for the aforementioned reasons I believe that the advantages of technology are out weighted by the disadvantages.


Thanks in advance !!

Hi,

I just want to congratulate Carolina, one of your commenter on this blog.

Your results are absolutely extraordinary!
You really gives hope to non-native people struggling to achieve similar results. TheIELTSSolution.com

Thank you.

great

GREAT CAROLINA...........Pls let us know how did u achieve such a great score! we shall be obliged...thanks and good luck forever.....

Hiiii......simon......i have exam on january 17 th...i practise well...but still i find difficulty in writing and reading modules....so i need to get your valuable suggestion for my results

Hi my writing is poor so what can i do for improve my writing

"Do you believe that societies ought to enforce capital punishment or Are there alternative forms of punishment that would be better used?"

Hi Simon! I need your help. Please help me to check my essay with this topic.

It is an obvious fact that capital punishment is highly controversial issue arounf the globe to this era. Some people argue that the national government should enforce the death penalty to make the righteous society, whilst others deem that it should be banned in our society. As for me the latter assertion proves to be more convincing.

To begin with, death penalty can prevent the increasing crime rate. Many people deem that if the government implements the stricter law, the offender might fear the death penalty to commit similar offence. By enforcing this law, people can feel that crime is not tolerated. Moreover, since there is only limited imprisonment, the citizen does not cost a lot of money. Therefore, the criminal would deter commiting offences.

Looking at the issue from a different religious point of view, capital punishment is an definitely immoral act. According to the bible, there is only one creator and God himself has the only supereme right to take a person's life. Even the most righteous members of the justice league has an accurate decision on a person. It can infringe upon human right.

It is also an indubitable fact that capital pinishment ought to be opposed. This is due to the fact that peope who are needy can become the victim of this penalty. A lot of innocent poeple would be wrongly convicted and executed by this law. Because of that, death penalty is not a good deterrent and even East Asia countries: the government still fight to the high sexual abuse rate and it is the heaviest sentence.

In a nutshell, death penalty may be effective to prevent any capital offence; however, I still would strongly claim that death penalty has to be revoked. As a matter of fact, in the present day world, many countries still abolish this penalty and we must give a chance for sinner to plead forgiveness like our almighty God has done to us.

Hi Simon. I will be happy if you check my essay. Thanks.
People have different views about whether or not official authorities should invest more funds on schooling rather than on leisure and competitive games. While I agree that education is the main tool for a success of a nation, the benefits of sport and recreation should not be neglected.
I must acknowledge that there are several opportunities which have been created by sports and recreation. They help to attract record numbers of tourists and raise the tourism profile of the country . For example, during Baku2015 1st European Games many tourist visited Azerbaijan to see fascinating opening and closing ceremonies of games. From my point of view, spending money on sports and leisure can not only make a healthy community, but also bring income or revenue for a country.
Apart from sport and recreation, governments, to me, must also subsidize education. Literacy is the main necessity of the life. Firstly, education has enriched in understanding of people and it created civilized society as compared to past barbaric community. For instance, today well-educated people are more aware of social evils such as, drugs and alcohol. Moreover, investment in education system is one of the best way in order to improve a country's economy in the long-term. Take an example, South Korea and Finland invested a large proportion of their budget on education and this gained benefits in the form of high - tech companies such as Samsung or Nokia, respectively. I suppose education has changed not only the capacity of a person but also it has altered the whole world.
In conclusion, although there are many beneficial aspects of sports and recreation , governments should spend subsidize on education as it plays a key role in improvement of society.

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