Several people tried writing about the music topic in last week's lesson. Try to correct the mistakes that they made in the sentences below. I'll share my full essay next week.
- We have different types of music all over the world, we need music for various reasons.
- The first I think we need music almost for enjoyment.
- People listening to a variety of music is due to a number of reasons.
- It is clear cut evidence why we need for music.
- Traditional music of a country has more weight that the famous international music.
- At a glance, we need music for enjoyment.
- The people is more happier listening all kind the rhythms and sounds than without it.
- It helps to make relaxed from any sort of strain.
- If the international music would replace it then the whole historical experience of a country will die.