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Sunday, June 17, 2012

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hi simon,
which is correct, partially agree or partly agree?
thanks

Can someone check my letter on the above mentiones question?
Dear Mr. pattrick,
I am writing to bring to your attention that I can not continue a part time coure about fashion technology for which I had enrolled myself on 15th of last month.
Unfortunately, my compony has got some extra orders from Horizin Computers for supplying urgent computer accessories by the end of this year. Owing to this traumatic situation, I am working twelve hour shift from today.
I know it will be difficult for you to consider my request in the middle of the semister. I am not asking any refund, but i am rethinking to start this course later sometime the following year. It will be appreciated, if you would instruct the accounting department to adjust my fee for the next session.
I lookforward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Ziaul Huda

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am your part-time student, learning Guitar in Royal College of Music and I am writing this letter to inform you that I would not be able continue the classes from 10th of July onwards.

I am working as a Software Engineer in Cisco and I am assigned to a new project in London. Hence, I need to relocate to London for next three months. I shall return to India in October. [a]

Initially, I was hesitant to join this new project since I am continuing classes in your college. However, I chose to take part in the new project, since it is very crucial for my career. [b]

Since it is a temporary assignment at my work, I would like to resume my course in October, if you permit. So far, I thoroughly enjoyed your classes and would not want to drop out. [c]

I am hoping for your kind consideration.

Yours Sincerely,
Ethan

Hi Meso,

Both are fine.

Thanks for sharing your essays Ziaul and Ethan. I'm afraid I don't check students' work - if I did this, everyone would send me their essays.

dear simon,
i have the same letter 2 times came in IELTS AND the letter is...your friend wants to visit your country with his family,tell him where he will stay,which places of your country he should visit and what things he will bring?
i dont know what mistakes i had done.both time i got 6.5
can you please go through this letter..it will be a great help..thanks

Hi Nur,

I'll try to use that letter in a lesson soon.

HI nur,
I am tring to write a good response to the letter you got in your exDear Johnson.
Hope this letter fined you in good health and sprit. I am writing to inform you that I have arranged my farm house for staying there with your family in tranquility. The farm house is actually quite spacious and is located on the opposite side of a bank of a river. I hope, you will have a great time.
You see, I am happy to share with you some popular destinations and historical landmarks you should visit. There are many beaches, art related venues and famous historical buildings to visit here, but I would like to mention here the names of two land marks that always inspire me are The Char Minar and the Salare Jung Museum. You should visit both skyscrapers.
You should also bring some warm clothing, sun glass and video camera to have a fun with your family. These days, there is a cold wave in southern India, so don’t forget to bring your jackets and coats to protect from chilly nights.
I look forward to your reply.
See you soon.
Abdu Rahman

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Can someone check my letter:

Dear Mr Bush

I am writing with regards to inform you that I could not continue to attend the evening French class this semester, due to the project that has been given to me by the Company.

I have attended your evening class since November 2012 and enjoyed all the learning method that has been given by you. Besides that, I also worked as a casual administration officer in the morning, in Company which is near to the course center.

The Company has just promoted me as a full time accounting officer, and they would like me to handle the cash administration for a Project in Perth, Western Australia for five months. I must leave the city next week, therefore I will not be able to follow the course for this semester.

When I return, I will continue to take the next semester class, and I hope that it is fine with you.

Thanks for your kind attention.

Your Sincerely

Dean Jones

Dear Paul,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue attending your evening IELT’s preparation class once the course end this month.

First of all, I would like to say a big thank you for the tips and advice you taught us in class. However, starting from next month, my work’s schedule would be unsuitable, as I will be travelling overseas to broaden my knowledge in the field of Civil Engineering.

Furthermore, working more than forty hours a week and attending part time class can be very stressful and tiring. Consequently, I have not thought of re-enrolling into the course once I come back from overseas but on the contrary, I will try to do some self-study and sit the Ielt’s exam by the end of this year.

I do hope you understand my situation and hope that I would be the first student you taught that scored band 8 in all criterion.

Your sincerely,

Quoc HUA.

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