Did you try planning some ideas for last week's essay question?
Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When I wrote my list of hobbies, I realised that some were easy and others were difficult. As a result, I'd say that "I partly agree" with the statement.
Here's my 4-paragraph essay plan:
- Introduction - write 2 sentences: introduce the topic, and give an overall answer.
- Main paragraph - about difficult hobbies. My examples: swimming, football, chess. Most sports and games are difficult, but the challenge makes them more enjoyable, especially when you can see that you are improving.
- Main paragraph - about easy hobbies. My examples: photography, reading, cinema. In my opinion, you do not need to be an expert to enjoy taking photos, reading books, or watching films. I find these activities both easy and enjoyable.
- Conclusion - repeat / summarise your answer in one sentence.