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1.I am completely agree that job satisfactions for workers are important.
2.On the other hand,maybe it it difficult for all walkers to be happy in their jobs.
3.We do not only need to work in order to pa our bills etc, but also need to enjoy our jobs.

I definitely agree that job satisfaction for workers is important.

On the other hand, it maybe difficult for all workers to be happy in their jobs.

Although we all need to work to/in order to pay our bills, we also need to enjoy our jobs.

Can't wait to see the answers for this.

Anh

I completely agree that job satisfaction is important for workers.

On the other hand , it maybe difficult for all workers to be happy with their job.

We all need to work to pay our bills etc. Although, we also have to enjoy our job.

I completely agree that job satisfaction is important for all workers.

On the other hand, it may be difficult for all workers to be happy with their job.

In order to pay bills ect. we all need to work, but we also need to enjoy our job.

I completely agree that job satisfaction is important for workers.

On the other side, it may be difficult all workers to be happy in their jobs.

we also need to enjoy our jobs, although we all need to work in order to pay our bills etc

Looking fowrwards to seiing answers

Az

1. I completely agree that job satisfaction is important for all workers.

TO BE VERBS can'be used with agree. Also satisfaction is used with IS. NOT are.

2.On the other hand, it may be difficult for all the workers to be happy in their jobs.

In the third sentence ALTHOUGH is a SUBORDINATED CONJUNCTION. It can't be used as the first word of a sentence and PERIOD AFTER IT. It cant be used with BUT.

Although we all need to work in order to pay our bills etc, we also need to enjoy our jobs.

Thanks

I am completely agree that job satisfaction for workers is important.

On the other side, it may be difficult for all workers to be happy in their jobs.

Although, we all need to work in order to pay our bills etc,we also need to enjoy our jobs.
Thank you

1. I am completely agree that job satisfaction for workers is important.

2. On the other side, it is difficult for all workers to be happy in their jobs.

3. Although, we all need to work in order to pay our bills etc, we also need to enjoy our jobs.

1.I completely agree that job satisfaction for workers is important.

2. On the other side, it may be difficult for all workers to be happy in their jobs.

3. Although, we all need to work in order to pay our bills etc, we also need to enjoy our jobs.

CORRECT ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

1. I completely agree... IS important.

(NEVER "I am agree")

2. On the other HAND, it may be (2 words) difficult... OR: perhaps it is difficult...

(Don't use "maybe" at the start of a sentence in formal/academic writing)

3. Although (NO COMMA) we all need to work in order to pay our bills, (NO "BUT") we also need to enjoy our jobs.

Also, don't use "etc." in your essays.

Simon

Thanks for your given time

No problem.

Dear Simon,

I think maybe = perhaps. Why don't we use the word maybe?

Thao

Hi Thao,

"Maybe" is an informal word that's fine in spoken English, but we prefer "perhaps" in formal writing contexts.

Dear Simon,

My answers are:

1. I completely agree that job satisfaction is important for workers.

2. On the other hand, it may be difficult for all workers to be happy in their jobs.

3. Although we all need to work in order to pay our bills etc., we also need to enjoy our jobs.

Thanks so much,

Chris Sol.

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