Correct the mistakes in the sentences below.
- With developments in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents are being reduced.
- Scientists need to make more researches to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
- Using of nuclear power not only does it produce cheap electricity, but also it does not have any pollution.
I'll put my answers in the "comments" area tomorrow.
Hi Simon
I have tried to correct your sentences.
1.the risk of accidents reduced.
2.to do more researches
3.but also have any pollution.
Posted by: Partasia | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 10:26
Hi Simon,
My correction:
1. With developments in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents (are) is being reduced.
2. Scientists need to (make) do more researches to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3.Using of nuclear power not only (does it) produce cheap electricity, but also (it does not) (have any) eliminate pollution.
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I have a question for No.1 if "developments" can be used in plural.
I looked it up and found it means "a process" if we use in plural.
Is it true?
Regards,
Kim
Posted by: Kim | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 10:52
Hi Simon,
1. With the development of nuclear technology, the risk of accidents has been reduced.
2. Scientists need to do more researches on improving the safety of nuclear power station.
3. Use of nuclear power, not only it produces cheap electricity, but also it has no any pollution.
Regards
Prakash
Posted by: Prakash | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 12:53
01.will be reduced.
02.research.
03.not only produce cheap electrycity
Posted by: kabir | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 13:48
1. has been reduced.
2. conduct more researches
3. The use of/ Using + nuclear power
Thanks
Posted by: Agnes | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 14:26
1.with development in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents is reduced.
2. scientists need more researches to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3.using the nuclear power, produces electricity and does not have any pollution.
Posted by: Tara | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 14:52
hi simon
1-the risks are
2-do research
3-does not only produce..but also it does not have..
Posted by: manal | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 14:53
hi SIMON,
1 the risk ... has been reduced
2 do more researches
3 not only produces
Posted by: Az | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 15:19
Hi Simon,
These are my response.
1-With developments in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents has been reduced.
1- Scientists need to do more researches to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3-Using of nuclear power not only produce cheap electricity, but also not has any pollution.
Posted by: Ruth W | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 15:50
With development of nuclear technology the risk of accidents has been reduced.
Scientists need to do more researches into the ways in which the safety of nuclear power stations can be improved
Using of nuclear power not only (produces\ provides us with) cheap electricity, but also it does not cause any pollution.
I think that "using" cannot have the pollution but it can cause the pollution.
Posted by: Maksim | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 17:15
Hi Simon,
My answers are :
1-With the development of nuclear technology,the risk of accidents is being reduced.
2-Scientists need to do more researches to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3-Using of nuclear power not only produces cheap electricity,but also doesn't have any pollution.
Posted by: Marya | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 17:24
1. will be reduced.
2. do more research.
3. but also it doesn't have any pollution.
Posted by: SULTAN2020 | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 17:45
hi Simon
With the development of nuclear technology, the risk of accidents has been reduced.
Scientists need to do more researches to improve the safety of nuclear power stations
Using of nuclear power doe4s not only produce cheap electricity but also does does pollution
Posted by: Sulaiman | Sunday, February 13, 2011 at 21:53
1.With developments in nuclear technology, the risks of accidents are being reduced.
2.Scientists need to do more research to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3.The use of nuclear power produces not only cheap electricity, but also less pollution.
Posted by: Gopi | Monday, February 14, 2011 at 02:29
1.With developments in nuclear technology, the risks of accidents has been reduced.
2.Scientists needs to make more research to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3.Using nuclear power produces not only cheap electricity, but also no pollution.
Posted by: jhen | Monday, February 14, 2011 at 05:03
1)with the developments in nuclear technology,the risks of accidents has been reduced.
2)scientists needs to conduct more research to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3)use of nuclear power not only produces cheap electricity but also it does not cause any pollution.
Posted by: ana | Monday, February 14, 2011 at 10:37
With the development in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents has reduced.
Scientists need to make more research to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
The usage of nuclear power not only produces cheap electricity,but also it does not make any pollutions.
Posted by: Sabina | Monday, February 14, 2011 at 11:08
1.The risk of accident is being reduced
2.To do more reserches
3.The use of nuclear power not only produces cheap electricity,also it has no pollution.
Posted by: sanam | Monday, February 14, 2011 at 22:44
1. With developments in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents are reduced.
2. Scientists need to make more research to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3. Not only using of nuclear power does it produce cheap electricity, but also it does not have any pollution.
Posted by: mhr | Tuesday, February 15, 2011 at 11:31
CORRECT ANSWER FROM SIMON:
1. With developments in nuclear technology, the risk of accidents IS being reduced.
('risk' is singular)
2. Scientists need to DO more RESEARCH to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
('do research', not 'make researches' - never use the plural, 'research' is uncountable)
3. There are several ways to write this. Gopi's suggestion is a good one:
The use of nuclear power produces not only cheap electricity, but also less pollution.
Thanks for your suggestions.
Simon
PS. Kim: 'developments' is just a normal plural. The meaning doesn't change.
Posted by: Simon | Tuesday, February 15, 2011 at 16:28
Dear Simon!
My result is:
1. With developments in nuclear technology, the risk of its accidents is being reduced.
2. Scientists need to do more research to improve the safety of nuclear power stations.
3. Nuclear power not only produces cheap electricity, but it does not also cause any pollution.
--> I have a suggestion that it is meaningful to say that 'Nuclear power produces cheap electricity' because 'The USE of nuclear power' DOES NOT 'produce cheap electricity'.
Do you agree with me?
Thanks so much,
Chris Sol.
Posted by: Chris Sol | Sunday, April 14, 2013 at 17:16