Students shared some good essays about the animal experiments topic that we looked at last week. Can you improve the sentences below?
- This essay examines both sides of views.
- The first reason, the lives of animals should be respected.
- Most people think animal testing is necessary but others are upset of these activities.
- On other hand for those who are opposed this type of research would stand on ethical issues.
- Thanks to the researches on mice, scientists have known how to treat diseases.
- To sum up, it is highly true that we rely on animals’ research to help us to develop medicines.
I'll share my full essay next week.